This action comic is not without its potential although semi-crude drawings and characters devoid of irony take their toll on what might otherwise have been a typical but well thought out plot worthy of Spiderman or the Daredevil. Jack is an unlikely hero, scrawny and tentative, so the big unexplained secret of what he is doing as the protagonist of comic series also remains to be answered. Some of the dialogue was very successful, and Jeff varies panel size to cut through the narrative and achieve maximum tension.
comic / #2 / publisher: Fat Chance Comics / main creator: Jeff Spokes / $1.25 / 30 Pope Cres., Saskatoon, SK, S7L 5K2